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Faith or Science? Unveiling the Secrets of Melissa's Epilogue

This post contains spoilers for the ending of Melissa.

Unveiling the Epilogue: A Look at Nathan's Future

Hey everyone! Today, we're diving into the mysterious epilogue of Melissa. Beta reader feedback offered some fascinating insights into Nathan's character development and the lingering questions the ending leaves us with.

Growth and Transformation:

The beta reader noted that while Nathan doesn't undergo a dramatic shift in the epilogue itself, the inscription on the book hints at a future transformation. This suggests the seeds of change have been planted, and Nathan's journey is far from over. We can expect him to grapple with his experiences and the wording on the prayer book, leading him on a path of self-discovery.

Believability and Emotional Resonance:

The reader found Nathan's actions and reactions believable. This is great news! It means we're connecting with his emotional state and his struggle to make sense of everything. The epilogue leaves him with a new direction, one that feels like a natural progression for his character arc.

Hope and Mystery: The Inscription's Power

The inscription on the book is a key element. The beta reader believes it offers more direction than closure. This creates a sense of intrigue – what does the inscription mean? What path will it lead Nathan down?  This unanswered question, along with the message about enlightenment and overcoming worldly desires, keeps the reader engaged and eager for more.

Exploring Themes: Guilt, Faith, and Redemption

The epilogue explores powerful themes. The reader feels Nathan carries the weight of guilt and responsibility for the events.  This emotional burden adds depth to his character and makes him relatable.  The prayer book, a symbol of faith, suggests a potential path towards redemption.  Will Nathan embrace this path?  The story leaves that open-ended, inviting readers to ponder his future.

What the Beta Readers Said

"The notion both terrified and captivated Nathan, leaving him at a crossroads. Would he continue his relentless pursuit of empirical truths, or would he open his mind to the possibility of a higher power guiding his life? With each passing moment, the urgency of this decision loomed larger, casting a weight upon his heart and soul," one reader commented. 

This excerpt perfectly captures Nathan's struggle between logic and faith, a central theme of the epilogue.

A Lasting Impression

The beta reader was left with a positive impression of the story, praising the blend of science fiction, intriguing details, and a gripping narrative.  This is fantastic feedback!  It suggests the story has resonated with readers and left them wanting more.

What do you think?

The epilogue of Melissa offers a glimpse into Nathan's uncertain future.  What path do you think the message inscribed in the prayer book will lead him down?  Will he find peace and redemption?  Share your thoughts in the comments below!

Reader Feedback Reveals: Unveiling the Secrets of "Melissa"

Unearthing Secrets

Have you ever wondered how readers experience your story? What resonates with them? What leaves them wanting more?

Today, I'm taking you behind the scenes with feedback from my recent beta-readers, avid readers who provided invaluable feedback during the beta-reading stage, on chapters 21-30 of my novel, "Melissa." Get ready to delve into a world of suspense, surprising plot twists, and complex characters!

Witnessed

One of the readers, captivated by the latter chapters, highlighted the story's ability to weave suspense and leave them guessing: "Oh yes it kept me glued to the page, especially on these last 2/3 chapters," she shared.

She was particularly intrigued by the unexpected turns of events in the novella. When asked about the most surprising plot twist, she exclaimed, "Chapter 28 I think, the one we heard about the child being kidnapped. That was the best plot twist and it's very well integrated with Melissa's character and biggest desire and with the story as well."

A Visitor in the Night

But "Melissa" isn't just about heart-pounding moments. The reader also praised the character development. Here, the reader elaborated on the chapter that revealed the most about a character: "I would like to say chapter 28, cause of the info that went out of the kid, even tho it didn't directly connect with Melissa but it kind of says a lot at the same time and then we have the chapter 27 for Nat's arc.'" Witnessing Nathan grapple with grief and the consequences of his actions resonated deeply with the reader.

The immersive descriptions also played a key role in transporting the reader into the story's atmosphere. The reader explained how the descriptions contributed to the atmosphere: "The descriptions in chapters 27 and 30 and the answers of Nat to what was described."

Barefoot Steps in the Frost

One of the readers highlighted Chapter 30's description of the scene in the cathedral (or church, if you prefer) as particularly unsettling: "A guttural cry escaped his lips, echoing through the cathedral, like a tortured wail: 'NO!' He recoiled in horror, his legs buckling beneath him." This vivid imagery creates a palpable sense of dread and leaves a lasting impression.

The enthusiastic response to these chapters is a testament to the captivating nature of "Melissa." It's a story that lingers in your mind long after the last page, leaving you eager to discover what unfolds next.

Of course, every story can benefit from improvement. This reader offered valuable suggestions for adding more details to further enrich the world-building and the connection between a particular narrative element, "The Secret Life of Ants," and the characters' relationship.

These insights will undoubtedly help strengthen the overall story.

As I continue to refine the manuscript, your insights are invaluable in shaping the world and characters. Stay tuned for future updates as we delve deeper into the world of "Melissa"!

P.S. Have you experienced a story that left you wanting more? Share your thoughts in the comments below!

Unveiling the Rewards for "Melissa's" Beta Reading Program: A Heartfelt Thank You!

Greetings, fellow fans of the fantastical!

As the beta reading program for "Melissa" draws to a close (program start date: February 4th, 2024), we at The Melissa Team want to express our deepest gratitude to all the incredible readers who embarked on this journey with us.

Your insightful feedback has been invaluable in shaping the thrilling world of Melissa and ensuring it resonates with readers like yourselves.

A Look Back: The Rewards of Collaboration

We're thrilled to share the fantastic rewards you earned through your participation in the beta reading program:

1. Signed Digital Copy of Melissa, Part I: Congratulations to those who completed 50% of the questionnaire! Hold a personalized, signed digital copy of the first part of Melissa, a testament to your contribution to the story.

2. Complimentary Digital Copy of Redemption: For those who reached 75% completion, dive deeper into our world of suspense with a free digital copy of our chilling supernatural novel, Redemption.

3. Become a Literary Guardian: A special thank you to those who achieved an impressive 90% completion! Your name will be forever etched in "Melissa's" history, proudly displayed on the dedication page of Melissa, Part I.

4. Queue-Free Access to Future Writings: A round of applause for those who completed the entire beta reading process (program ended: March 17th, 2024 - Extended)! Enjoy exclusive queue-free access to the author's future works, ensuring you're among the first to experience upcoming stories.

As of today, March 17th (midnight), the beta reading program for "Melissa" has officially closed. However, if you haven't submitted your final questionnaire yet, no worries! Your well-deserved rewards are still on their way. We'll be processing them as soon as we receive your completed questionnaire.

A Glimpse into the Future: Calling All Hamlet Heroes!

We were truly inspired by your dedication and insightful feedback during the Melissa program.  This passion for storytelling paves the way for our next exciting project!

Get ready to sharpen your wit and unleash your creativity, because the early sign-up program for our new novella, "The Last Choice of Hamlet," is coming soon!  Stay tuned for more details on how you can become a beta reader and help shape this unique reimagining of the classic tale.

Thank you once again for being a part of this incredible journey with Melissa.  We look forward to collaborating with you on future adventures!

Sincerely,

The Melissa Team

PS Don't forget to check out the stunning video of Echoes of Ambition and Horror: Quotes from the Characters of "Melissa": 

Intrigued or Indifferent? Reader Reactions Shape "Melissa's" Prologue

 

The prologue: Your key to entering the captivating world of Melissa

Embarking on the beta-reading journey with "Melissa" has been a fascinating exploration of how the prologue serves as the gateway to its mysterious world. In this article, I delve into personal stories and intriguing feedback received during this journey, shedding light on the diverse reactions that offer valuable insights for authors navigating the beta-reading process.

Intrigued, Yet Unsure

Diverse Feedback: Reader reactions on the prologue varied widely

For some beta-readers, the prologue of "Melissa" was deemed "fine" but felt somewhat familiar, lacking the spark of originality. One reader, in particular, likened it to "hundreds of scripts," emphasizing the delicate balance between world-building and avoiding clichés.

Hooked by Suspense

Foggy Journey: The bridge to Melissa's world, shrouded in anticipation

Conversely, other readers were captivated by the prologue's strong suspense, leaving them hungry for answers to the myriad of questions it posed. This feedback underscores the prologue's effectiveness in grabbing attention and creating a sense of anticipation.

Visions and Preferences

Interestingly, opinions on the prologue's impact varied widely. Some perceived it as "vague" and lacking "luster," while others championed its role in setting the stage for the unfolding narrative. This divergence highlights the subjective nature of reading and the influence of personal preferences on the reception of a prologue.

Engaged and Eager

Despite the differences in opinions, a unanimous sentiment emerged among the beta-readers – the prologue successfully engaged them and ignited their curiosity to delve deeper into "Melissa's" captivating world. This collective agreement reinforces the prologue's crucial role in drawing readers into the story.

Learning and Refining

 Beta-reading insights: Illuminating the path to a stronger prologue.

The diverse feedback received during this beta-reading journey serves as a valuable guide for refining the prologue. Striking a delicate balance between clarity and originality is now a priority, ensuring that it not only engages but also resonates with readers, creating a lasting impression.

Share Your Thoughts!

As I navigate this journey of refining "Melissa's" prologue, I invite you to share your thoughts on prologues in the comments below. Do you believe in their importance, or do you prefer diving straight into?

Unveiling the Unexpected: Reader Choices for "Melissa" Part II

 

A closer look reveals hidden depths

As my beta readers delved into the first ten chapters of "Melissa," a fascinating question emerged: which minor character captured their imaginations and deserved further development in Part II?

While I anticipated familiar favorites, I received a vibrant tapestry of choices, reminding me of the surprising power well-crafted supporting characters hold.

The usual suspects were passed over in favor of unassuming figures like Gera, the lab assistant. Her unique blend of scientific discipline and artistic spirit, coupled with her dedication to environmental causes, resonated deeply with some readers. Their eagerness to uncover her motivations and hidden depths highlights the enduring impact even seemingly minor figures can leave.

Gera

Meanwhile, the enigmatic Monica captivated others with her captivating personality and intriguing history of multiple marriages. Her veiled intentions and ambiguous role within the story fueled speculation and anticipation, making her a popular choice for further exploration. This underscores the effectiveness of crafting characters shrouded in mystery who pique the reader's curiosity.

Monica

Beyond these, the diverse perspectives of my readers shone through. Some championed Mark Brown, the protagonist's grounded friend, appreciating his unwavering loyalty and contrasting outlook on life. This choice exemplifies the beauty of diverse perspectives and how different readers connect with characters in unique ways.

Mark Brown

The sheer variety of responses has been incredibly enriching. It demonstrates the true power of minor characters to enrich a narrative, adding depth and dimension to the fictional world and offering endless possibilities for exploration. As I embark on writing Part II, I carry this invaluable feedback close to my heart, knowing that even the most seemingly minor player can hold the key to unlocking a reader's imagination.

What memorable minor characters have you encountered in other books? Share your thoughts and predictions for "Melissa" Part II in the comments below! It will be beneficial for "Melissa" Part II.

Unlocking Efficiency with Digital Tools: Lessons from My Beta-Reading Journey

Diving into the manuscript, ready to provide insightful feedback

Sharing my experience with managing a beta-reading program can offer valuable insights to fellow authors. Today, I delve into the strategies I used, including the challenges faced, successes achieved, and tips for running an efficient program, with a particular focus on utilizing digital tools.

Prioritizing Digital Tools:

Although recognizing the value of every beta-reader and respecting diverse preferences, my program primarily focused on individuals comfortable with digital tools. This meant utilizing readily accessible and often free platforms, such as 🆓 PDF for manuscripts, Google Forms for questionnaires, and email for communication.

While acknowledging some readers favor traditional methods, my focus was on optimizing efficiency for both myself and participating readers within the chosen e-format. This approach not only ⏳ saves time and energy but also reduces costs, a benefit appreciated by many authors.

This screenshot shows how I leverage digital tools for efficient beta-reading

Embracing Digital Tools:

Even if you're new to digital tools like Google Forms or email, fear not! Amazing YouTube tutorials can guide you through the process step-by-step. Remember, practice makes perfect – try sending test emails and forms to yourself first, and always share proofread links for feedback.

Scheduling Magic:

Email shines with its scheduling magic! Set your emails to arrive at the perfect day and time, ensuring your message lands when recipients are most likely to engage.

I'm curious to hear what strategies you've found effective for managing your beta-reading programs! 

Additionally, have you encountered any negative experiences with using digital tools in this process? 

Sharing your insights and challenges can help us all learn and improve together.

#betareading #authors #collaboration #feedback

Passion, Knowledge, and a Sneak Peek: Building Trust with My 'Melissa' Beta-Team

 

Don't let the pretty scenery fool you: Nathan's about to uncover some dark secrets

With the all chapters of 'Melissa' polished and ready to unfurl their inner secrets, I found myself at a crossroads: choosing the story's first companions – the beta-readers! It wasn't a decision to be taken lightly.

"Melissa," a psychological thriller delving into the darkest corners of the human psyche, craved more than just readers; it craved passionate allies. Readers whose hearts resonated with its themes of faith, pride, and the shadows that lurk within all of us.

My search began with a carefully crafted survey. Not just a box-ticking exercise, it ventured deeper, exploring readers' beta-reading experience, their genre preferences, and most importantly, their understanding of "Melissa's" core themes. Were they in sync with the story's exploration of the human condition?

"Melissa" Novella Beta-Reader Survey (Powered by Google Forms)

But qualifications weren't enough. I sought passionate individuals, whose eyes would light up at the prospect of unraveling "Melissa's" mysteries. Readers whose feedback wouldn't just point out flaws, but celebrate triumphs and suggest exciting possibilities.

Unveiling the Secrets: Get a Sneak Peek at the "Melissa" Beta-Reader Survey

Once I had chosen my dream team, it was time to craft the perfect invitation – their welcome aboard "Melissa's" thrilling adventure. 

Welcoming aboard Invitation to "Melissa's" thrilling adventure

This wasn't just an "here's-the-story-tell-me-what-you-think" message. It was a detailed roadmap, filled with essential tools and resources:

- A clear reading schedule, outlining chapter deadlines, and dedicated Q&A sessions:

Mark Calendars: It's "Melissa" Beta-Reading Time!

- Exclusive access to relevant materials, like genre, shot description, themes, plot, character and even writing style to deepen their understanding of "Melissa's" world:

"Melissa" Beta-Reader Resources: Everything You Need to Know!

- And most importantly, my sincere gratitude and appreciation for joining this crucial stage of the story's journey.  ❤️ 🫂 🚀

Finally, the moment arrived to share the first 10 chapters, along with the survey link.

"Melissa" Beta-Reading Invitation: Access the First 10 Chapters & the Survey

Selecting beta-readers wasn't about ticking boxes; it was about finding collaborators, fellow storytellers who believed in "Melissa's" potential. With their insightful feedback now flowing in, I'm confident this novella will emerge from its cocoon, stronger and more enthralling than ever before. Stay tuned for further updates on this exciting journey!

From Script to Novella: The Birth of "Melissa"

 

Melissa's painting "Black & White" 

For several years, "Melissa" brewed as a captivating screenplay, simmering with the potential for a deeper dive into the human psyche. But scripts, like blueprints, lack the nuanced tapestry of prose. I craved to explore the labyrinthine depths of my characters, to illuminate Melissa's and Nathan's, unspoken thoughts and desires.

The title page of "Melissa's" screenplay.

That's when "Melissa" embarked on a metamorphosis. Guided by the strong foundation of the script, I embarked on a journey of transformation. AI tools like Bard, GPT-4, and Sudowrite became my writing partners, whispering suggestions for the improvement of vivid prose and unlocking vibrant possibilities for word choices within the narrative.

Sudowrite Story Engine

Each keystroke became a brushstroke, meticulously painting a world where the boundaries between reality and the supernatural blurred. The psychological thriller I envisioned evolved into an intertwined horror, faith, and the insidious poison of false pride.

A flashback "Funeral"

Currently, we are running a beta reading program, which will last five weeks. The human feedback of "Melissa's" story is crucial and truly appreciable.

Beta Reader Evaluation Process

This isn't just a story penned on paper; it's a story reborn, one that invites you to question your own perceptions and delve into the darkness within. Are you ready to face the chilling realities of human pride, the transformative power of faith, and the promise of redemption? 

Scene "Ghost"

The stage is set, the curtain rises, and "Melissa" awaits your presence.

Follow the beta-reader program updates on our blog to learn about the engaging and insightful process of being a beta reader, and potentially join the program for "Melissa," Part II!

#Humanpsyche, #Falsepride, #Betareaders, #psychologicalthriller 

Shape Your Fate: Embarking on a Journey with 'The Last Choice of Hamlet'

 

The Last Choice of Hamlet ©

Dear Passionate Readers,

We hope this message finds you well. 😊

On behalf of the writing team, we wanted to take a moment to express our deepest gratitude for the overwhelming response we received to the Beta Readers Program for our upcoming novella, "Melissa". 🤯 Your enthusiasm for this thought-provoking tale about life, death, fate, and the power of personal choice has been truly inspiring. 👐

While we are thrilled to have assembled a remarkable group of beta readers who share our passion for psychological thrillers and thought-provoking storytelling, we understand that not everyone could join us due to scheduling conflicts or other commitments. 🗓️ We want to assure you that your interest and potential insights are still highly valued, and we hope you'll consider participating in future Beta Readers Programs. 🙋‍♀️

As we dive deeper into the creative process for our next writing project, we're excited to share that we'll be exploring the complexities of human existence, the weight of choices, and the eternal battle between personal desires and fate in the Romantic Tragedy titled "The Last Choice of Hamlet". ⚔️

Inspired by Shakespeare's masterpiece and grounded in historical facts, this story will delve into the profound decisions that shape our lives and the consequences that follow. ⚖️ We anticipate launching our next beta-readers program closer to May 2024, and we'll be sure to keep you updated on our progress. Stay tuned for more exciting news! 🔥

In the meantime, we invite you to follow us on our social media channels to receive behind-the-scenes glimpses into our creative process and exclusive opportunities to shape the story of "The Last Choice of Hamlet". ✍️

Links to channels:

My Blog: https://spiritualjacklynalo.blogspot.com/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/jacklynalo

LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/jacklynalo/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/Jacklyn_A_Lo

We value your feedback and invite you to join us as we bring this captivating tale to life. 🙏

Thank you again for your unwavering support and relentless enthusiasm for our work. 💪 We are incredibly fortunate to have such an engaged and discerning readership. 🤓

With heartfelt appreciation,

The Writing Team 💖

#psychologicalthriller

#thoughtprovoking

#historicalfiction

#newrelease

#comingsoon

#Hamlet