Passion, Knowledge, and a Sneak Peek: Building Trust with My 'Melissa' Beta-Team

 

Don't let the pretty scenery fool you: Nathan's about to uncover some dark secrets

With the all chapters of 'Melissa' polished and ready to unfurl their inner secrets, I found myself at a crossroads: choosing the story's first companions – the beta-readers! It wasn't a decision to be taken lightly.

"Melissa," a psychological thriller delving into the darkest corners of the human psyche, craved more than just readers; it craved passionate allies. Readers whose hearts resonated with its themes of faith, pride, and the shadows that lurk within all of us.

My search began with a carefully crafted survey. Not just a box-ticking exercise, it ventured deeper, exploring readers' beta-reading experience, their genre preferences, and most importantly, their understanding of "Melissa's" core themes. Were they in sync with the story's exploration of the human condition?

"Melissa" Novella Beta-Reader Survey (Powered by Google Forms)

But qualifications weren't enough. I sought passionate individuals, whose eyes would light up at the prospect of unraveling "Melissa's" mysteries. Readers whose feedback wouldn't just point out flaws, but celebrate triumphs and suggest exciting possibilities.

Unveiling the Secrets: Get a Sneak Peek at the "Melissa" Beta-Reader Survey

Once I had chosen my dream team, it was time to craft the perfect invitation – their welcome aboard "Melissa's" thrilling adventure. 

Welcoming aboard Invitation to "Melissa's" thrilling adventure

This wasn't just an "here's-the-story-tell-me-what-you-think" message. It was a detailed roadmap, filled with essential tools and resources:

- A clear reading schedule, outlining chapter deadlines, and dedicated Q&A sessions:

Mark Calendars: It's "Melissa" Beta-Reading Time!

- Exclusive access to relevant materials, like genre, shot description, themes, plot, character and even writing style to deepen their understanding of "Melissa's" world:

"Melissa" Beta-Reader Resources: Everything You Need to Know!

- And most importantly, my sincere gratitude and appreciation for joining this crucial stage of the story's journey.  ❤️ 🫂 🚀

Finally, the moment arrived to share the first 10 chapters, along with the survey link.

"Melissa" Beta-Reading Invitation: Access the First 10 Chapters & the Survey

Selecting beta-readers wasn't about ticking boxes; it was about finding collaborators, fellow storytellers who believed in "Melissa's" potential. With their insightful feedback now flowing in, I'm confident this novella will emerge from its cocoon, stronger and more enthralling than ever before. Stay tuned for further updates on this exciting journey!

From Script to Novella: The Birth of "Melissa"

 

Melissa's painting "Black & White" 

For several years, "Melissa" brewed as a captivating screenplay, simmering with the potential for a deeper dive into the human psyche. But scripts, like blueprints, lack the nuanced tapestry of prose. I craved to explore the labyrinthine depths of my characters, to illuminate Melissa's and Nathan's, unspoken thoughts and desires.

The title page of "Melissa's" screenplay.

That's when "Melissa" embarked on a metamorphosis. Guided by the strong foundation of the script, I embarked on a journey of transformation. AI tools like Bard, GPT-4, and Sudowrite became my writing partners, whispering suggestions for the improvement of vivid prose and unlocking vibrant possibilities for word choices within the narrative.

Sudowrite Story Engine

Each keystroke became a brushstroke, meticulously painting a world where the boundaries between reality and the supernatural blurred. The psychological thriller I envisioned evolved into an intertwined horror, faith, and the insidious poison of false pride.

A flashback "Funeral"

Currently, we are running a beta reading program, which will last five weeks. The human feedback of "Melissa's" story is crucial and truly appreciable.

Beta Reader Evaluation Process

This isn't just a story penned on paper; it's a story reborn, one that invites you to question your own perceptions and delve into the darkness within. Are you ready to face the chilling realities of human pride, the transformative power of faith, and the promise of redemption? 

Scene "Ghost"

The stage is set, the curtain rises, and "Melissa" awaits your presence.

Follow the beta-reader program updates on our blog to learn about the engaging and insightful process of being a beta reader, and potentially join the program for "Melissa," Part II!

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Shape Your Fate: Embarking on a Journey with 'The Last Choice of Hamlet'

 

The Last Choice of Hamlet ©

Dear Passionate Readers,

We hope this message finds you well. 😊

On behalf of the writing team, we wanted to take a moment to express our deepest gratitude for the overwhelming response we received to the Beta Readers Program for our upcoming novella, "Melissa". 🤯 Your enthusiasm for this thought-provoking tale about life, death, fate, and the power of personal choice has been truly inspiring. 👐

While we are thrilled to have assembled a remarkable group of beta readers who share our passion for psychological thrillers and thought-provoking storytelling, we understand that not everyone could join us due to scheduling conflicts or other commitments. 🗓️ We want to assure you that your interest and potential insights are still highly valued, and we hope you'll consider participating in future Beta Readers Programs. 🙋‍♀️

As we dive deeper into the creative process for our next writing project, we're excited to share that we'll be exploring the complexities of human existence, the weight of choices, and the eternal battle between personal desires and fate in the Romantic Tragedy titled "The Last Choice of Hamlet". ⚔️

Inspired by Shakespeare's masterpiece and grounded in historical facts, this story will delve into the profound decisions that shape our lives and the consequences that follow. ⚖️ We anticipate launching our next beta-readers program closer to May 2024, and we'll be sure to keep you updated on our progress. Stay tuned for more exciting news! 🔥

In the meantime, we invite you to follow us on our social media channels to receive behind-the-scenes glimpses into our creative process and exclusive opportunities to shape the story of "The Last Choice of Hamlet". ✍️

Links to channels:

My Blog: https://spiritualjacklynalo.blogspot.com/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/jacklynalo

LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/jacklynalo/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/Jacklyn_A_Lo

We value your feedback and invite you to join us as we bring this captivating tale to life. 🙏

Thank you again for your unwavering support and relentless enthusiasm for our work. 💪 We are incredibly fortunate to have such an engaged and discerning readership. 🤓

With heartfelt appreciation,

The Writing Team 💖

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Unveiling the Mysteries of "Melissa": Sign Up for the Beta Reader Program!

Melissa. Part I

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46k words, 218 pages

Are you a passionate reader with a keen eye for detail?  Do you love delving into captivating stories that challenge your perceptions? 

If so, you could be the perfect candidate to join our exclusive beta reader program for Melissa, a captivating novella that blends dark fantasy, horror, science fiction, and philosophical questioning.

As a beta reader, you will have the exclusive opportunity to read and provide feedback on the first part of Melissa, shaping the future of this thought-provoking tale. 

Your insights will directly influence the final version of the story, ensuring that it resonates with readers like you.

Epilogue. Melissa. Part I

Here's how you can participate:

Sign up for the beta reader questionnaire here

Read Part 1 of Melissa and provide thoughtful feedback.

Help us make Melissa the best it can be.

Shape the future of Melissa and earn exclusive rewards!

Beta readers who complete 50% of the questions will receive a signed copy of Melissa, Part I.

Those who complete 75% will also receive a complimentary digital copy of our supernatural novel Redemption.

Attain 90% completion and become a literary guardian, earning your name on the dedication page of Melissa, Part I.

Complete the entire novella and enjoy queue-free access to our author's future writings.

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Complete this questionnaire by Jan 28th to reveal your literary prowess and claim your place among our esteemed Beta Readers!

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Any questions or concerns: jacklyn.betareaders@gmail.com

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Witness the Power of Melissa:
Experience a tale where reality blurs with the supernatural

Venture into a world where fantasy and horror collide with faith and psychology, creating an unforgettable reading experience

The Price of Immortality: Unveiling Nathan's Dark Secret

Delve into an immersive 45,000-word supernatural tale, brought to life with captivating illustrations.

Delve into the Supernatural: A Glimpse into Melissa

Shape the future of our upcoming novella, Melissa, and receive exclusive rewards for your insightful feedback, which will directly influence the final version of the story.

If you possess a passion for reading and a keen eye for detail, we invite you to join our beta reader team.

Requirements:

Avid reader with a love for fantasy, horror, faith, and psychological genres

Experience in providing beta reader feedback (previous readings preferred)

Willingness to commit 3 weeks to reading the novella and providing thoughtful feedback

Shape the future of our upcoming novella, Melissa, and receive exclusive rewards for your invaluable feedback.

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Melissa's Bare Feet Leave Trails of Mystery

Rewards:

50% Completion: Share your insights on at least half the questions and receive a signed copy of Melissa, Part I.

75% Completion: Dedicate your time and expertise to answer three-quarters of the questions and receive a signed copy of Melissa, Part I, plus a complimentary digital copy of our supernatural novel Redemption.

100% Completion: Become a literary guardian and answer all questions meticulously. Your efforts will be rewarded with a signed copy of Melissa, Part I, a complimentary digital copy of Redemption, and your name proudly featured on the book's dedication page, acknowledging your significant contribution.

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Join our team of passionate readers and play a crucial role in shaping the final version of Melissa!

Stay connected for exclusive updates and information about our beta reader program!

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My Blog: https://spiritualjacklynalo.blogspot.com/

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/jacklynalo

LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/jacklynalo/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/Jacklyn_A_Lo

Unveiling the Mysteries of "Melissa": Sign Up for the Beta Reader Program

"Melissa" novella

Join the Beta Reader Program for "Melissa" and Be Among the First to Experience This Captivating Novella.

Prepare to be gripped by a chilling journey into the darkest corners of human nature with "Melissa," a captivating novella that blends dark fantasy, horror, science fiction, and philosophical questioning.

Get ready to embark on a harrowing tale of love, loss, ambition, and scientific hubris as you follow Nathan, a brilliant biophysicist consumed by an insatiable desire to bring back his beloved wife, Melissa.

As Nathan's experiments unleash a monstrous entity, a warped reflection of the woman he once cherished he must confront the clash between science and faith, the depths of human hubris, and the path to redemption amidst the shadows of his own creation.

Are you ready to be captivated, disturbed, and challenged by this thought-provoking novella?

The meticulously edited novella "Melissa" is now ready for its first beta readers.

Get ready to journey into the chilling world of "Melissa" and follow Nathan and Melissa's tormented journey in the beta reader program for Part 1.

Stay updated on the beta reader program and learn more about this captivating novella by following me on:

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Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/jacklynalo

LinkedIn: https://www.linkedin.com/in/jacklynalo/

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Join the beta reader program and be the first to experience the chilling saga of Nathan and Melissa's tormented journey!

The Forbidden Fruit: A Metaphysical Journey Through Temptation and Growth

The Forbidden Fruit

This metaphysical review of the Finnish film "The Forbidden Fruit" (Kielletty hedelmä), 2009 delves into the complexities of spiritual growth and temptation. 

The review was written by Jacklyn A Lo.

Soul

All of us, 8 billion souls on planet Earth, have a different spiritual origin.

Some of us are very young souls who have just entered the human world and have a lot to learn, while others are more mature souls nearing the end of their earthly journey.

Moral

The film begins in a Laestadian religious community, an environment of pure morality, rules, and hard work.

Within this strict setting, the teenager Raakel encourages herself with a strong sacred motto: "Give me, Lord, spiritual strength for the coming day!"

At this moment, she looks like a mature soul with deep-seated faith.

Temptation

Despite her religious convictions, Raakel accompanies her friend Maria to the big city, hoping to prevent her from falling into temptation.

However, Raakel herself succumbs to the temptations of the city, questioning her own spiritual strength.

This episode raises two possibilities about Raakel's soul:

1. She is a mature soul who is facing temptation and is unable to overcome it. This suggests that even the most experienced souls can struggle against the allure of worldly pleasures.

2. Her soul is still very young and entered the religious community to find a stable platform from which to grow. This indicates that her spiritual journey is still in its early stages, and she has yet to develop the resilience to resist temptation.

Spirit

Raakel's impulsive attempt to seduce a man further demonstrates her struggle with temptation.

This impulsive action could have been avoided if she had sought spiritual guidance and strength to resist evil.

Instead of succumbing to temptation, Raakel could have taken a different path:

1. She could have humbly asked a higher power for spiritual strength to overcome evil. This act of seeking guidance would not only strengthen her soul but also accelerate her path toward enlightenment.

2. She could have tried to understand the man she was trying to seduce, not just for physical attraction but also for his spiritual core. This could have led to a deeper connection and mutual support, potentially strengthening her spiritually.

Spiritual Growth

The film's ending, with Raakel leaving the community and returning to the city, is rather abrupt and leaves the audience with unanswered questions.

A more satisfying conclusion could have explored Raakel's continued spiritual journey, whether she would return to the community or find a new path toward spiritual growth.

I highly recommend this film to anyone interested in personal growth, spiritual exploration, and the challenges of navigating temptation in a complex world.

 

Notes:

• Image credit: ©IMDb 
• Edited using Bard from Google AI

 

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