The Visitor. The Excerpt from Melissa (Ch. 24)

Is something watching you?

Fear of the ghostly unknown...

Fear of the ghostly unknown has haunted humanity for ages. These mysterious entities, emerging from the veil between worlds, provoke endless questions. What is their purpose? Do they carry messages? Or are they harbingers of something more sinister? What secrets do these ethereal beings hold?

The Visitor

The empty house is alive...

Chapter 24 of "Melissa" plunges us into a chilling encounter. 

As night descends, Nathan finds himself face-to-face with an unexpected, mysterious visitor. The sudden appearance of this ghostly figure transforms his familiar surroundings into a realm of terror and uncertainty.

Have a sneak peek into the hunting night of Nathan by the short excerpt from chapter 24:

 Excerpt from chapter 24

A chilling presence

"The oppressive darkness shattered with a spine-tingling crash... Nathan's gaze darted towards the ominous sound, a tremor catching in his throat. 

Swallowing his rising fear, he forced out a tremulous, 'Hello?' 

The silence that followed was an engulfing void, suffocating. Faint footsteps, barely audible over the pounding of his own heart, echoed from the living room.

 The floorboards creaked ominously as the footsteps neared, each groan amplifying his dread. The darkness seemed to press in, a suffocating abyss. 

Yet, a bewildering compulsion drove him from bed, his legs trembling with a mix of terror and determination."

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Shattered Plans, Uncertain Future: A Sneak Peek at "Melissa"

Shattered plans, uncertain future

We speed down familiar roads; a comforting melody on the radio creates a false sense of security. However, life throws curveballs. This near-miss experience is a stark reminder of life's unexpected turns and the fragility of our plans.

Author's Bio

Sci-fi author Jacklyn A. Lo crafts captivating tales that explore themes of free will, destiny, and the power of choice.

Her debut novel, "Redemption," is a time-travel adventure, while her upcoming novel, "Melissa," is a chilling exploration of ambition. 

Buckle up and prepare to be transported to new worlds and thought-provoking realities.

Excerpt "A Near Miss"

In this excerpt from my upcoming novel "Melissa," we encounter Nathan racing against time to meet Melissa for their anniversary celebration:

"The deafening CRACK split the air, followed by a bone-jarring CRUNCH.

A massive, decaying branch, as thick as his thigh at least, had plummeted from the trees. Its splintered end lodged itself stubbornly in the car's grill, mere inches from the windshield.

Nathan slammed on the brakes, the car screeching to a halt in a cloud of rotten sawdust. 

The frantic clicks of the blinker, accidentally activated in his panic, echoed the pounding of his heart, still reeling from the near miss. 

Adrenaline surged through his veins, obliterating the wild beating of his heart for a moment.

His mind raced, replaying the scene in slow motion - the plummeting branch, the sickening crunch of metal, the car's jarring halt. 

But he was alive. A wave of relief washed over him, so intense it almost felt like dizziness.

Then, a surge of anger followed. How could this happen? The thought of Melissa waiting for him, their reunion delayed by this stupid accident, sent a spike of frustration coursing through him. He clenched his fists, the anger momentarily eclipsing the dull ache in his chest."

As a writer, crafting a captivating opening scene is crucial. This excerpt from my upcoming novel "Melissa" aims to achieve just that. 

An ARC reader who reviewed the scene commented on its effectiveness, saying: "It leaves you wanting to know more about Nathan and Melissa's story." - Claude,  Advanced Reader"

Unveiling the cover art for my upcoming novel, "Melissa"

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